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Chapter 2 is being fixed up
Here's the lowdown: There are no grammar errors, but there isn't much description or character emotions, and some of the scenes are too short. As a result, it could very well be split into parts, causing the story to be extended to 30+ chapters instead of the regular 20.
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Posted on 14 Jul 2008 by CDrayan
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